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45 L-STYLE-CHOICES performance 1 Emerging Student's writing shows no evidence of deliberate language choices. Word selection defaults to the first word that comes to mind, typically vague and general ('good,' 'important,' 'interesting,' 'a lot'). Sentence structures are repetitive — usually simple subject-verb-object patterns of similar length — with no variation for emphasis, pacing, or rhetorical effect. When asked to analyze an author's style choices, the student can identify that the writing 'sounds good' or 'is detailed' but cannot name specific techniques or explain how particular word or sentence choices create meaning. There is no awareness that how something is written shapes what the reader experiences. In The Great Gatsby, Fitzgerald uses a lot of really good language to show what's going on with the characters. Gatsby is always trying to sound fancy and important because he wants people to think he's rich and cool and belongs in their world. He says stuff like 'old sport' all the time which is kind of weird if you think about it because nobody actually talks like that. Nick is the narrator and he describes things in a really detailed way that makes you picture what everything looks like. The language in the book is really important because it helps you understand the themes and also it makes the book more interesting to read than if it was just written in a boring way. 2026-05-24 00:17:32 2026-05-26 01:43:59 1
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